GlitchedSpirit's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slice of Us | Ch.1 - Newbie | Page 4]

This is looking really good. One problem though is that your content warnings are underneath the comic, making them useless. To make sure that people see it before the content starts, you could try a top panel with content warnings and other things that must be seen before the content, and then have the actual comic underneath.

DemonAscended responds:

Thank you for the suggestion, I'll look into making an asset for some warning to place before the pages here.

[What?]

Welcome to the Art Portal! The lineart here is really good.

MrAbsol responds:

Thank you!

[A Patryck doodle I made at night [eddsworld]]

This drawing has a lot of personality.

TezzerPower responds:

ty :]
It loos kinda bad from my other paper sketches ngl

[Bunny Bun]

This is really cute! Not often you see crafts like this.

Otoner responds:

Thank you and I am glad you liked it!

[Fresh Air]

Love it! Even though the animation could use a bit of work to make it more dynamic and realistic, the character design is great. You've really used the colour palette effectively here.

Tatamidork responds:

Thank you! sure, i can make the animation better, but i made these in my free time, it's just a hobby. nothing professional. i made this one really quick like 40 minutes max, so yeah, the animation looks mid 🤣