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Recent Movie Reviews

3 Movie Reviews

I really enjoyed this pilot. The animation is really high quality and it was funny too. However, I am a bit confused by the ending. The cat said that he managed to warm up to the idea of leaving the house, but this feels contrived for the sake of a message because he hated it right up until he drank booze just before leaving. To me, the alcohol feels a bit like a Deus ex Machina that swoops in to make a point. Also, the mouse holding onto the girls' coats seemed like a reasonable decision until the girls were revealed as stereotypical mean girls at the end. In future, I would recommend showing messages organically rather than having an explicit message that focuses on things added to the climax while ignoring the rest of the story.

Wow. This is really good, especially for a clamation. This took a lot of dedication and effort.

Solid and straight to the point. Animation is good and the scenario is funny.

EpicTDD responds:

Thank you!

Recent Game Reviews

25 Game Reviews

Good idea, but the controls don't make much sense to me. D and A would feel better for movement. Also, you might want to add something telling the player how to move because at first I thought that I couldn't move.

Simple but fun game.

Recent Audio Reviews

11 Audio Reviews

The song is pretty good. However, an important part of EDM (which is the parent genre of dubstep) is having a build-up before the drop. This can be easily done with noise that rises in pitch or drums that get incrementally faster (although there are more advanced ways to do it). This song seems to jump right into drops. If you add a basic build-up before, the drop will feel more satisfying.

Muffinly responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Although I will admit that I felt kinda rushed when making this track, and its remix (Which is kinda the same but with more melody, made just to sync with an official RS level, and it will come out on Friday). I suggest checking out my other songs. Viridescence, Technolaxy & Mello Dancer are my favorite songs I made.

The instrumental sounds good but the vocals' timings are strange. I would recommend adjusting the timings to fit the instrumental better or just removing the vocals.

I really like this song. It sounds a lot like real chiptune and it's a very catchy song.

PS: I have added an extract of the song to Wikimedia Commons as an example of arpeggio in 8-bit music and it is currently in Wikipedia's article on the technique.

Recent Art Reviews

15 Art Reviews

Looking good! Welcome to Newgrounds.

The way Mario is drawn is so cute!

This is looking really good. One problem though is that your content warnings are underneath the comic, making them useless. To make sure that people see it before the content starts, you could try a top panel with content warnings and other things that must be seen before the content, and then have the actual comic underneath.

DemonAscended responds:

Thank you for the suggestion, I'll look into making an asset for some warning to place before the pages here.

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